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it all comes down to this by ~hitsugayaforever:iconhitsugayaforever:

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Hide behind wristbands and long sleeves
Friendly smiles never cease; Nobody will ever see
You could fool the world with your clever ease.
Nobody will ever see what they are being forced to believe.

So easily broken.
So hard to repair.
She looks to the sky
To find nothing there.

She looks to her heart,
And hearing it beat,
She takes a blade,
Ready to cheat.

A razorblade slut is all this girl is;
A hopeless soul that no one will miss.

Cool, sharp metal grazing tender skin.
You say that is all it is.
But it is so much more.
©2008-2009 ~hitsugayaforever
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Submitted: May 15, 2008
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Okay before I begin:
Nobody take this the wrong way, okay?
I am not meaning offend anybody. And I am not saying this from any personal experience. Don't get the wrong idea about me. And don't worry.
It is just a poem I made. Nothing more, nothing less.
Thank you.

Anyway.
Yeah.
Enjoy.
-slinks away-
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~KupoG33K7:iconKupoG33K7: May 15, 2008, 5:38:22 PM
I like it. Nice rhythm and rhyme. Good job.

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.Rawr.
:evillaugh:
~cryingblood4kat:iconcryingblood4kat: May 15, 2008, 5:39:27 PM
woh....sounds just like me! WOW!! I LOVE IT!!!
~panKakes91:iconpanKakes91: May 15, 2008, 5:40:03 PM
very good!!!
everything about it is amazing...
i'm going to have to check out your gallery ^^
:omg:
:+fav:

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~chuynh:iconchuynh: May 15, 2008, 5:56:46 PM
rhymes are so awesome

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cut the potatoes woman!
~ttf98:iconttf98: May 15, 2008, 6:10:49 PM
Ah, another depressing emo poem. ]:

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If you woke up breathing, CONGRATULATIONS!! You get another chance!

Remember: Everyone seems normal until you get to know them.
~hitsugayaforever:iconhitsugayaforever: May 17, 2008, 8:12:23 PM
Thank you. <3
Take care!
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